Haiku Heights prompt (egg) Posted on May 17, 2013 by oneofaclass symbolizing birth living American life becoming hard-boiled * * * For Haiku Heights Share this:TwitterFacebookLike Loading... Related
A sneaky ending that took me by surprise. A rather zen experience (like being rapped on the head by the master). I like it. Thanks. Reply ↓
Interesting…liked it.. http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/05/bridge-shines-afar-haiku.html RS Reply ↓
How sad that life is becoming like this everywhere now not just in states but here in UK too! Reply ↓
Loved it. You ARE talking about real life. I don’t think it’s cynical, to me, it’s just reality but I’m not a kid anymore. Did you do the photography too? Reply ↓
Thanks! I agree it’s real life. I’d love to take credit for the photo, but it’s wikipedia commons work. Reply ↓
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A sneaky ending that took me by surprise. A rather zen experience (like being rapped on the head by the master). I like it. Thanks.
I hope zen master didn’t crack your egg!
It needs to be cracked now and then.
Hehe!! the last line says it all!! Toughened and tempered!!
Interesting…liked it..
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/05/bridge-shines-afar-haiku.html
RS
Well said!
How sad that life is becoming like this everywhere now not just in states but here in UK too!
Vicious but such an apt last line so mirroring our society! Good one!
Very true, “survival of the fittest” has always been the mantra…
Yes ..clever poem. Sad in a way.
‘Hard-boiled life’ makes it all the more interesting. Nicely!
Hank
I always have a job peeling those as well:)
I hope I never become hard-boiled!
Mine is in similar lines too…
Cynical but the truth I guess 🙂
Loved it. You ARE talking about real life. I don’t think it’s cynical, to me, it’s just reality but I’m not a kid anymore. Did you do the photography too?
Thanks! I agree it’s real life. I’d love to take credit for the photo, but it’s wikipedia commons work.