wilted Posted on September 14, 2013 by oneofaclass brilliant sun shines down lifting my spirits clouds roll in feeling wilted * * * For Haiku Heights Share this:TwitterFacebookLike Loading... Related
The heat on a cloudy day can be killing!! Oh! it is so hot and humid here for us and it can worsen next month!! Lovely!! Reply ↓
This looks like it has a “choose your own ending” – am I looking at the glass as half full or half empty? Really nice one! 😀 Reply ↓
ONE OF A CLASS 
Nice contrast and change of tone right in the middle of this.
Yes clouds may spoil all the fun 😀
like the contrast and apprehension………..
The heat on a cloudy day can be killing!! Oh! it is so hot and humid here for us and it can worsen next month!! Lovely!!
Ah! The heat. Terrible. But a beautiful haiku here. Wonderfully expressed.
Gaurang
I know what you mean. Clouds wilt me, too. Keep writing.
unlike some others, I see the clouds wilting in the shadow of your high spirits!
This looks like it has a “choose your own ending” – am I looking at the glass as half full or half empty? Really nice one! 😀