space Posted on September 23, 2014 by oneofaclass no end to the words on my screen – I prefer the empty space between * * * keyboard creatures from mars like to hang out in a space bar * * * all he thinks about is himself – nothing can fill space between his I’s * * * Inspired by the prompt at Share this:TwitterFacebookLike Loading... Related
^_^ I’ve been busy working on a project. And the haiku muse has mostly deserted me of late. It’s nice to find a bit of it back today. astronaut flight chicks trained to peck words on keyboard steers ship to henhouse Reply ↓
hatched Rubik’s puzzles coloured squares in need of help visit to the shrink visit to the shrink must think in yellow feathers say after me cheep cheep cheep i am a chick not a cheep leggo construction Reply ↓
Like you, I prefer the empty space between words—especially if someone is talking endlessly! π Desolate Space Reply ↓
so where have you been
hanging out in space bars with
astronaut flight chicks π
^_^ I’ve been busy working on a project. And the haiku muse has mostly deserted me of late. It’s nice to find a bit of it back today.
astronaut flight chicks
trained to peck words on keyboard
steers ship to henhouse
steers ship to hen house
they score a direct hit home
nothing but rooster
?!? π
nothing but rooster
with a surprised expression
and nowhere to roost
and nowhere to roost
that isn’t covered feathers
chicken a la king
I’m glad to read your muse is kicking up heels again. Lots of loud laughs here.
lots of loud laughs here
startled the hens who, in pain,
laid eggs shaped like cubes
laid eggs shaped like cubes
multi-colored moveable
hatched Rubik’s puzzles
hatched Rubik’s puzzles
coloured squares in need of help
visit to the shrink
visit to the shrink
must think in yellow feathers
say after me cheep
cheep cheep i am a chick not
a cheep leggo construction
I laughed and laughed this morning at your poem. Thanks so much. π
loved them all..:)
A very good take on the prompt. π
Like you, I prefer the empty space between words—especially if someone is talking endlessly! π
Desolate Space
That space between words is so important :p